Designer for essay: Muriel Cooper

Example:

I tried to make the logo more simple. I remove the amount of curves in sun-girl's hair and add a small cloud (which we usually see in daytime). Also, I re-arrange the stars to reach balance. However, I still want to make the sun-girl seem to ... overwhelm the moon-girl. ^^ things I found interesting is the mouth, on the left side it's look like she's sleeping, the other side it's like she's saying something.

Color version:



I put the moon's background semi-black (I meant not 100% black) to make it ... softer. I mean once the different between black and white is less, these colorful stuff seem to work-out.

Leave some comments please! ^^

Sun & moon

After several drafts I finally draw this logo in Photoshop (100%). I have trouble using mouse to do this. As you can see, the line is not as smooth as I want. I've changed the sun-girl's hair a little bit, make it more curly like the sun's beam light (like in some old design). Through the girls' characteristic I tried to express:
The moon-girl: she's sleeping, calm. Also, the feeling when look at her are quiet, charmed, secret.
The sun-girl: she's awake, control, powerful also beautiful ^^.

After all, I feel it's a little like the versace's symbol or Medusa Queen.

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